i told him i had trust issues,
and he said it was okay–
that he was a living hurricane,
who hid behind a deluge of feelings—
but it was just a romantic notion,
to think that two broken people
could somehow fix each other,
so i chose to barricade myself
in the safety of my own whirlwinds
because after the last downpour,
i simply couldn’t let myself fall
for another tornado of a boy
whose storm rivaled my own.
When two storms meet it can be terrifying. Some broken pieces can fit together but most often we are all broken in different ways. Really connect with this!
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and i love your take on it. thanks so much for commenting and actually contemplating what i’ve said… i’m always so impressed by your analyses xx
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You are kindly welcome. Great poetry deserves close reading and I really do love your writing. It always leaves me contemplating. xo
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as yours does for me. i’m grateful for the chance to be so inspired 🙂 xx
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Aw, that is touching, Thank you 🙂 xo
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I have no words for this ❤️❤️
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thanks so much, ash–you’re absolutely lovely 🙂 xx
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This is such a beautiful poem with an equally beautiful, yet sad message. The idea that two people become dependent on each other in an attempt to drown out all of those negative feelings is realistic and definitely something I have seen way too many times in real life. I think that in those situations you are in danger of losing yourself in the relationship and forgetting the relationship most vital in your life: the relationship you have with yourself. Because at the end of the day, only you can fix yourself fully but that can be a terrifying thing – to be confronted with all of your demons. xx
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thanks, lovely! that point is exactly what i was trying to convey with this poem. if there’s one thing i’ve learned from past relationships, it’s the dangers of relying on someone else to be your everything. that goes hand in hand with depending on him/her to make you better, and i love the idea you brought up of losing yourself when that happens. i hate that feeling, and a lot of what i write stems from the fear of misplacing who i am xx
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How people fall for the same idea over and over. 70 % of the time it does not work.
Great piece.
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and how sad for us, the disappointed subjects. thanks so much for reading 🙂 xx
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How sad for us indeed.
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This is so goooood
I would love to read a novel that u write someday.
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aw thank you! i don’t know if i could ever write a novel, but i’m actually aiming to release a poetry collection this december! close enough? 😉 xx
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ha!!! that was what i was taking about. i would LOVE to read it.
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yes! ah, what a sweetheart! i would love it if you did read it–i’ll keep you posted on how it’s coming along 🙂 xx
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seriously!!!!!!! yessss
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thanks so much for brightening my day 😀 xx
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i am happy it did
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Reblogged this on A universe fireflie… and commented:
I am pretty sure this is like the third time I reblogged her poems but it ain’t my fault. Blame her for being so awesome
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whoa–you are honestly my biggest fan, and i love you for it ❤ xx
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yeah well…ur poetry has a strange way of connecting with me and they have a certain feeling to it that i love.
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i’m so glad! i connect often with your poetry as well–i think we feel the same way about a lot of things xx
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yeah me too and its an honor
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trust me, it’s a huge honor for me as well 🙂 xx
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We always earch for someone who would understand us, and in that find someone as broken as us.
Your poem was so beautifully return, especially the last three lines!
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